Reviewer: moomoomilkcow
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Date: Sep 04, 2005 12:55 AM
Title: Chapter 1 The Birth of link
um...... I really hate to do this since your a first-timer, but it was horribly written. You just need some practice, and soon, you may turn out to be like Burn or Red Sparrow (my two fav. authors, both had a really bad start at fanfics.) I'll give you a 5
