This is a very interesting story. I must say...it's got me stuck on it. The plot seems good and I think some real cool things could happen in this story. ^_^ I'm glad you like my story....and I'm having one heck of a good time writing it, but that is beside the point. This is a good start to a story, that I think, that'll be really cool! Only complaint I have is....you need a slight grammer check. It's not that bad at all, but it kept itching my brain and I thought I should let you know.....but don't let me slow you down. XD When I get more time.....I shall read more. ^_^ I'm sure you'll like my story like I'm liking yours......I think I'm rambling now. XD Bad habit!!! Please keep going with this!!!

Author's Response: No, you're not rambling. I like to hear someone is enjoying my story and that I have made mistakes with grammer. I'm afraid I'm not much with good spelling or grammer I have an editer but I didn't have one for the first chapter. I promise you that the other chapters are edited. I don't care much for going back to edit the first chapter because it's just pratice for writing. That's why I'm writing this fan fic. I'm practicing for my book I plan to write. So if I make a few mistakes it's not much of a problem for me, but it is something I need to work on. Anyway, I really enjoyed your story. No one has ever written Link like that. Well, what I mean is no one has written him as a villan. Except for my editer anyway. But in the way he wrote it was still like Link was in a very big inner conflict with himself and still the victim of the story. Oops, now I'm rambling. Thank you very much not many people have reviewed my story so I am very thankful. ~Shrub

Perhaps among the most worthy stories ever posted on this site. The thing that makes Empire of Darkness my preferred story is--first of all, the interesting plot that will only increase in quality as the story moves forward. Along with that, the description to clearly reveal your characters and surroundings is no less than amazing, as well as the fine use of figurative language that seems to remain immortal throughout each individual chapter. Others should be reading this, as the author of this story assures in her writing the entertainment of readers and all that stuff. To put it simple, if your read the first chapter, most likely you'll get hooked. I expect a lot of positive reviews to this story, and Jessi, you're amazing! This may become one of the most prominent stories in this site!!!

Author's Response: Stop you're making me blush! Thanks so much Stev. That means a lot to me when you say that. But I'm afraid you are giving me too much credit. You did edited all my chapters so I must thank you. And you are by far a better writer then I. ~Shrub