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Reviewer: Joslyn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2005 10:08 PM Title: my princess life

WEll, when I first looked at this and read the reviews before this... "story", I figured that it really couldn't be THAT bad.... Sometimes reveiwers DO over-dramatize these things... Wow, I wish I had realized how wrong I was. So, I will not be nice as I had originally planned.... I read it and, now I believe that a large portion of my brain has just exploded. I could hardly understand this peice o' shit you call a story! You illiterate person, you! I looked at your profile, and you say you are 15, yes? So, what, your english teacher never taught you anything?! Please, PLEASE for the love of all that is good and pure, WRITE SOMETHING WORTHWHILE! Ahem... well, I am done.

Reviewer: Navi24 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2005 7:23 PM Title: my princess life

umm.......it was kinda complicated.....and......uh.......confucing PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!!!*rates 7*

Reviewer: Burn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2005 10:04 PM Title: my princess life

I don't really give a shit if your the most popular person at your school. You'd be rejected by the dorks if you came over here.

Reviewer: Your Mom Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2005 10:48 PM Title: my princess life

My Song This story sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, sux, and SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUX!!! ~woot~ The end REDEADS WRITE BETTER STORIES! *oops*

Reviewer: Sonofanutcracker Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2004 11:04 PM Title: my princess life

what the hell was that?!?!??!? Wooot my but u freak! That was the absolute dummest thing i have ever read in my life. I completely agree with the mysterious stranger. U SUCK! I Want to give it a -108030303034575795795 BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO woot- what the hell!?

Author's Response: wow im so surprised. i thought this 1 was awesome :(

Reviewer: The Mysterious Stranger Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2004 10:37 PM Title: my princess life

It would be a shame to call this story a story, its just a muddled page of sentences that don't make sense. Please, if your going to post poems and stories than at least make an effort. First of all, stories tend to have plots, second of all stories tend to have paragraphs, and most importantly, they have to be understandable. You failed in all three. 1/10. I would give you a 0 but there was nothing lower.



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