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Date: May 03, 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Spencer Serra Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2007 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

it's getting better! I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: The Fierce Deity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2007 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

FANTASTIC!!! Great setting, and great conflict. PLEASE write more.

 

Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2007 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hah, this reminds me of the movie "the Departed", making the social rejects do the dirty jobs for the government. Not too bad so far, you could have a little more scenario detail to give the reader a stronger visual basis, but you need to be more clear at what is going on. For instance, there is no mention at all of who Jerome was talking to - obviously a servant, but was it? Also, perhaps instead of just saying "a strange man" you could be more specific and say "a man weraing a strange uniform" or "with a strange, discolored face." Hopefully I have been helpful, keep working at it!



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