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Reviews For Gentle Rain (original version)
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2005 8:35 PM Title: Bloodstains
pretty good story i read the whole thing keep it up
Reviewer: Moo Cow Nation Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2004 1:28 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl
I noticed that you said that you were going to redo this. I thought this was a great story! It was very sweet. Why would you change it?
Reviewer: Queen Zora Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2004 2:42 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl
Hmmmmmmmmmmm..... do not normally like this sort of thing, but must make exception. v. good. deep and very sweet. like it. lots. 10 outta 10. deffo.
Reviewer: Gash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2004 6:19 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl
I don't really like it you have some potential but it's untapted Malon and Link where thought of to be a central focus and Garra is from the Naruto comic strip (bad ass chrachter though) I hated it so I'm going to stop now you could have done better my friend
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2004 6:40 PM Title: The Conciquinces of Betrayal
Well, an inticing cliff-hanger, It'll be interesting to see how this will unfold. Another thing I like about this story is the way you have two major conflicts going on. You're an author with persistence and intigrety, I like that.Keep your work coming!
Reviewer: The Mysterious Stranger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2004 12:27 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl
Well, by my standards this isn't a very good story. The plot is very scarce and lacks some detail. It doesn't exlplain how Link went from Malon to Zelda, it just happened out of the blue. There is no indepth description of characters that gives them a certain personality. It was unnessesary for the other "fierce" guard to enter the story as you killed him off as fast as he appeared. I'm sorry to say, but I did not like this story so I will give it a five.
PS this is not meant to offend you, it is just my opinion and is not ment to be believed.
Reviewer: serenitythefaierikin Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2004 6:11 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl
You know what? I really love this story! It is so great! I hope Link gets his head out of his butt and goes back with Malon, though, cause Zelda isn't exactly my favorite character in this story! Poor Malon! :( Waaaaah! -_- ANYway, keep up with this story! Yay for you!
Reviewer: Hyperlink Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2004 3:23 AM Title: Gentle Breezes
Nice to see a good romance story in here. Good job, and keep it up!
Reviewer: Amy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2004 1:14 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl
This story is very good. Altough chapter 4 is short, I can tell you spent alot of time on it. I would recomend it two times. It's one of my favorite storys on the whole server, partly becuase of how intamently loveing Link and Malon are.
Reviewer: Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2004 1:06 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl
I really liked this, It was a bit rushed at first, but as the story goes on it get's ALOT better, and I think that you deserve a ten. It was a great story, I'd recomend it to anyone.