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Reviewer: Amy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2004 1:14 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

This story is very good. Altough chapter 4 is short, I can tell you spent alot of time on it. I would recomend it two times. It's one of my favorite storys on the whole server, partly becuase of how intamently loveing Link and Malon are.

Author's Response: Actually, it did take a long time, even though it was so short. I went over it again and again, changing it again, and again, and it might get changed again.

Reviewer: Martini Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2004 1:06 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

I really liked this, It was a bit rushed at first, but as the story goes on it get's ALOT better, and I think that you deserve a ten. It was a great story, I'd recomend it to anyone.

Author's Response: Thanks, do reccomend. ^_^

Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2004 2:06 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

I'm sorry I accidently pressed the submit button before so i'll continue the review. Like I said before it was a bit scarce in deatail but overall it was pretty good.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2004 1:44 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

Alrighty then i'll review your story. It was a little bit rushed and scarce on details (i mean, i'd like to know what happened to Link during those two years. And how does a bath work in Hyrule?

Author's Response: If you think about it, since the ranch is in the middle of hyrule, the river and the mountain are both nearbye, so it would be easy to iriagate water from the river heated by the volcaninc activity. All you would have to do is pull a little cork, and you would have nice, hot, water.

Reviewer: Princess Rein Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2004 1:43 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

Alright, alright, I'll review! This story is a good one (I don't usually go for the whole Malon+Link thing, but I'll make an exception) please keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks. I don't plan to stop anytime soon. ^_^ This is about the 5th version, I've changed it several, but I think this is the final version.

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2004 10:27 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl

People have been reading, so why no reviews? (I'm the author, in case you didn't realize.) I promise that if you leave a review, I'll read your stories and review. Promise. ^.^

Author's Response: You know, I checked my mail and saw I had a new review. I got very excited, then I figured out that I wrote it. . . pretty dumb, huh. . .

Author's Response: I should have 15 reviews by now. . . please r&r. . . Please. . .

Author's Response: please. . . .



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